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    Default piano butterfly

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    nikon d 300 iso 400
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    Hey Stuart,
    This one too looks a touch bright and yellow.....so somilar to other post.....I would tone that down. The flash opened up the BF nicely but I would tone down the FG leaf a bit more than the rest as well. Nice pose and the minor tweaks should take this up a notch.

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    I agree with Roman but I really like the contrast in color of the butterfly with the plants and I like the placement of the butterfly in the frame and how it is posing.

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    Stuart...nice capture of this bfly ...I like the pose and sharpness on the bfly. I would like to see the bg simplified by getting rid of some of the black holes or using a more open aperture next time

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    The Butterfly look sharp and exposed well. Agree on toning down and maybe even cropping the BG.

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    Very eye catching and a difficult image to control. I would suggest bringing everything down a little, the highlights, the contrast and the saturation, I think you have a fine image. Maybe of course you prefer the bright colours but for my eye and monitor just a little on the heavy side.

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