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    Nikon D300
    Nikkor 500mm f/4 D IF-ED AF-S
    1/1000s F/5.6 ISO 200
    Gitzo GT5541LS
    Wimberley Head II

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    Sameer:

    I like the angled pose, dangling feet.

    I might be tempted to move him slightly to the right in the frame, and tone down the bright white spots in the lower background.
    If possible, I would try to open up the shadows under the wing just a bit.

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    Thanks Randy

    Glad you like the angled pose. I waited long for him to get into action and stork took off in a great style.
    I like your advise to tone down bright spots and open up shadows under the wing.

    Liked very much your quick suggestions!
    Cheers
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    I like the composition as the ground at bottom right nicely anchors and balances the rest of the image. I agree with toning down or outright eliminating the OOF birds in the background. Neat take off pose indeed!

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    Thanks Daniel
    Yes, ground at bottom balances. Glad that you considered this a neat take off pose!
    Cheers!
    Sam

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