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    Shot taken from Protected area of central Alborz

    c & c most appreciated.



    Camera Model: Canon EOS 500D
    Lens: EF400mm f/5.6L USM
    Image Date: 2012-08-03 10:22
    Focal Length: 400mm
    Focus Distance: 11.5m
    Aperture: f/5.6
    Exposure Time: 0.0004 s (1/2500)
    ISO equiv: 400
    Exposure Bias: none
    Metering Mode: Matrix
    Exposure: aperture priority (semi-auto)
    White Balance: Auto
    Flash Fired: No (enforced)
    Orientation: Normal
    Color Space: sRGB
    Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows

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    Kasra:

    Good timing! Nice sense of action form the wing position.

    Light was harsh and caused some shadows. Did you need to do any shadows and highlights work here? A little work on the face would smooth it out nicely.

    I like the scale of the perch.

    From a comp. standpoint, I would try a version with the bird moved to the left a bit and crop down a little from the top, it is a bit too centered for my tastes as is.

    Soft, colorful background.

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    Like the gorgeous bird, background, perch and pose. I agree on it being to centred, and moving the bird further to the top left could help.

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    Kasra,
    Excellent image.Very nice action captured.I like the nice colors,perch,BG and wing blur.
    Agree with Randy about crop.

    Regards,
    Satish.

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    Nice balancing pose, good perch and background. Not so great light though. Exposed best you could but still contrasty. I'd crop some off the left.

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    hi kasra
    Nice pose, good perch and background.

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