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    Black-winged Stilts and Wood Sandpiper

    1DIII 600mm 2x f/16 1/400 ISO 800

    Thanks in advance for looking and comments, all critiques are welcome.

    All the best

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    Nice one; really like all the bills going the same way, cute WS in the middle.
    Soft from the x 2 but great idea! and title.

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    Yes the title is well thought of! I like the concept of the image. Too bad the right bird is not closer to the other two, and I would try to clean up the smudgy area near the WS' bill. Did you need to do some water clean-up?

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    Might lighten up the bird in the center as well.

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    Thanks guys for your replies and suggestions.

    Quote Originally Posted by Daniel Cadieux View Post
    . Did you need to do some water clean-up?
    I'm really lazy in post production but i'd like to see somting about it.

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    I like the moment with the symmetry. Very very good call on stopping down so much. DOF is extremely critical in such shots.

    I'd have composed it differently though. I think you can crop some from the bottom and if you have add a tiny bit to the right side. I think that will create better balance.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kaustubh Deshpande View Post
    I like the moment with the symmetry. Very very good call on stopping down so much. DOF is extremely critical in such shots.

    I'd have composed it differently though. I think you can crop some from the bottom and if you have add a tiny bit to the right side. I think that will create better balance.
    Thanks for your reply Kaustubh, I agree with your suggestion but unfortunately the picture is full frame and I did not crop margins.
    Daniel was right: too bad the right bird is not closer to the other two. In the case with a light crop the image would be of even greater impact also in this dimension.
    I had just enough time to fit the 2x to catch the moment immediately after the birds have broken lines.

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