
Originally Posted by
Stuart Bowie
Hi Gail, good low perspective, and I like the show of the raised wing. The yellow wing is nice and sharp, well exposed, and showing lots of finer detail. Ive looked at this a few times before going ahead with my version, mainly with regards to rotation. I can clearly see what you have based your 'alignment' on, and you are not wrong. What my eye is being drawn too, is the blue band of water just in front of the bird, and to me it is 'sloping' to the right. Here is my repost, giving that line a slight CCW rotation, taking a bit off the bottom, and running a slight multiply blending mode to the whole image. Hope you dont mind.