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BPN Member
Dan, I like the square composition and the high key look. Nice one
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I really like that Dan, but would prefer the left bird's bill to be complete. Easy enough to grab a bit from the other bird.
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Lovely minimalist approach. You can just imagine the light brush strokes used to create the birds. Maybe just a bit more lines of water to surround the bill of the left bird to give it more context.
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Dan, some good suggestions made...nice processing...I might move the chop away from the corner a bit..but that's personal taste...I like Nancy's idea RE the bill and the water.
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Dan, I am liking this a lot! The minimalist look and the different composition really do give an Asian flair-nicely done. I might like a thinner border but you are the expert on this theme and you know best.
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Landscapes Moderator
Hi Dan, I really like this one. You have presented it beautifully. I do wish for a little more bill on the second bird also, but this is also beautiful as presented.
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Nice minimalist look. Wish the head of second bird were more distinct. Peaceful scene.