I like the classic pose but this image might do better in eager to learn. On top of what Maxis mentioned the cropping it too tight and there is a blue cast to the image.
I see that the crop is a little tight, I agree about the hot whites which have been discussed in depth here. As far as the background it was my intent to get just what I did in the background. I didnt want a sterile background. I do agree that with just the water in the background it would be nice. Personal taste. I do appreciate all the comments. I have learned much on this forum.