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    Default My Love/Hate Affair With Cone Flowers Continues...

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    One of these days...I will actually get an image of a cone flower that does justice to what I see in the flower...in the meantime, I'll keep plugging away. 180mm lens, f/8@1/50. After some basic adjustments to the RAW image in LR, layers of NIK's Tonal Contrast, Topaz->Detail and Fractalius were applied, all with varying degrees of opacity.

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    Hmm...the center of one of the BG flowers bothered me...the large, dark OOF area in the ULC of the image...don't know why I didn't see this originally...then again...it may have just been me.

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    Very striking image.
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    Difficult flowers to photograph for sure, John. I like your use of fract and the vibrant colors. I think if it were mine, I might crop a bit tighter, to focus attention more on the center of the flower.

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    Thank you for the comments...Maureen, still working with the crop...and a crop/change of angle....this is one...

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    And this is the other. I also toned these down just a smidge....
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    John, I think I like the 2nd post the best - I like the added room at top because it looks like smoke rising from the center like one of Steve Adkins smoke images I think I'd prefer a crop from the left to eliminate most of the outer oof petal but I'm not sure - this is a tough one to figure out.
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    I like where you are going with these images. Fractilus causes the upper petals to seem to merge with the nearby flowers, which I find pleasing. Hence, I would not crop from the top nor left. If I were to crop, I'd do it from the bottom and right. I think I'd like the lower petals to be less sharp, so as to be more like the upper ones. I used the smudge tool in Elements 10 to blur them a bit. I hope you keep working on these lovely flowers.

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    John, I am going to go with the OP or Anita's crop. I like the flow of the image better for those two crops. Nice work with the filtering.

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    Might be back to the drawing board with this one......thank you for the comments and suggestions!

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    Hi John, I go with frame 6...the less distractions the better

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