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Very nice Jon.
I like the BG and your composition and IQ.
If I had this shot in my portfolio I would be over the moon and would think it was perfect...but this is a critique forum so I have to say I would love to see both eyes with a more direct gaze.
I like the fanned wing. Looking forward to more of this beautiful bird.
Gail
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Great to have an active Barn Owl in youre area. We have none.
The flight image is very nice, excellent angle, evenly lit, and great eye contact.
I was wondering if it would improve the already excellent image by selectively do linear dodge on the darker green on the top left.
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Jonathan, What a nice image of a great bird. Love the hunting posture and gaze. Nicely exposed. The yellow dots are probably flowers but I would remove them in this image. I will be following your posts, hope you have more opportunities.
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You did extremely well in your one opportunity. Nice flight pose, comp and exp. I too am looking forward to seeing more as you hopefully have continued opportunities with this owl.
TFS,
Rachel
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Super Moderator
this is great Jon, one of your best so far! congrats. I'd just sharpen it a bit more
well done!
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While not the greatest near wing position, you do have a nice look at the head. I like the habitat behind the bird. I think the image as posted is a little dark, and while I like the pano crop, there's a bit too much space on the left. Here's a repost with a bit cropped off the left, a curves adjustment to bring up the whites in the bird, and some additional sharpening. How do you like it?
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Excellent captured and a like the comp. Good with some more images
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Thanks very much indeed everyone, much appreciated.
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Superb image, Jon. The bg is great and I like the original comp. Some more sharpening on the bird is all I'd add. Love it.
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Forum Participant
very nice Jonathan,nice BG,like the flight pose,like the pano,and like Doug's post as well.thanks.