Richard, You captured nice wing position but somehow I find BG very distracting, would tone down highlights in BG and crop it tighter to reduce the distraction.
Like the last repost the best. Nice and sharp with good exposure. I wish the beak wasn't merging with the far wing. I actually kind of like the habitat - it grew on me.
Comp-wise, I'd crop some below and add some above to the repost.
Hmm so you'd like the bird lower - interesting, thanks I will check out when I eventually relook at the file
everyone has a different take on things as one would expect.
Personally I liked the BG its where they live but it was a bit bright