Into the box

[Bob Miller]

I saw this commercial for sominex that kept running on the Tv and thought it should ....next time it came on......play in the bed. This is from my long ago archives and I was wondering what people thought.....so ...all comments welcome!

[Hazel Grant]

Interesting. It would have fit the surreal category we had recently.

[denise ippolito]

Bob, This is a great example of OOTB thinking. I like the way the LLC flows but I wonder if a less centered main subject would work, I did a crop let me know your thoughts.

[Dave Woeller]

I agree, very creative. Can't see Denises crop though.

[Bob Miller]

Hi Denise....Thanks for your feedback. I do think your crop improves the flow of the composition. Thanks!

[denise ippolito]

I agree, very creative. Can't see Denises crop though.

Hi Dave, When I first posted my repost it didn't come up- so I tried again and it went through. I think we were posting around the same time :)

[Cheryl Slechta]

Hi, Bob, really nice OOTB thinking. I think Denise's crop improves on an already nice image

[Judy Howle]

I really like your image, very creative! I like Denise's crop best.

[Andrew McLachlan]

Very creative and fun Bob, great OOTB thinking!