I love this theme but it is a hard one for me! :cool: Dan, I really appreciate your time in judging this week.
I tried to get the look of watercolor on brown paper but couldn't really find a good way to simulate the brush strokes. I know that Dan will say "use a brush", but I'm not that good at it! Hope you like this attempt. :)
12-02-2010, 12:07 AM
denise ippolito
Kerry, You knocked it out of the park! Excellent look for the theme. The chop could probably be a deeper red but we'll have to wait for Dan's call on that. Great job!!:)
12-02-2010, 01:19 AM
Dan Brown
Very nice Kerry! Nice bamboo even if it doesn't look brushed:). A cupla suggestions, I think that I would like to see the calligraphy parallel with the edge of the frame and maybe moved over to the left a bit. And, the chop color is too pink for me, I would make it a deeper red. The chop color seems to be a little bit of a problem this time around!
BTW, are the mods in the contest?
12-02-2010, 01:30 AM
Kerry Perkins
Thanks Dan! Mods are not eligible. :cool:
12-02-2010, 01:35 AM
Indranil Sircar
Excellent composition, Kerry. Great mood here. Love the colors and the light on the bird.
12-02-2010, 01:38 AM
Kerry Perkins
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I see the blue in the chop now, here's a better version. Thanks! :cool:
12-02-2010, 07:17 AM
Patti Edens
Kerry, Adding the bamboo was a great idea and really balances out the composition. Love the lettering - Another creative idea that works well.
12-02-2010, 09:38 AM
denise ippolito
Nice repost Kerry!!:)
12-02-2010, 12:05 PM
Jay Sheinfield
Kerry,
Beautiful pose and perch. This fits the theme so well............Delicate and peaceful feel to the image.......well done.
12-02-2010, 04:26 PM
Julie Kenward
Love that repost, Kerry! I thought the bird looked a litte dark in the OP but the repost takes it over the top for me. You placed everything perfectly - comp is spot on!
12-02-2010, 05:53 PM
Andrew McLachlan
Love it Kerry. The egret is posed nicely and your placement of the bamboo and text is perfect. Love the tone too.
12-02-2010, 08:09 PM
Christopher Miller
Beautiful work, Kerry! Very balanced composition, all the elements flow together perfectly. I love the sepia tone. Very well done!