Once upon a time, when I was a child, I had a little plastic camera. This was before I knew about head angles and oil spills. There were just the birds and the joy I felt as I watched them take off and fly as if they didn't have a care in the world.:)
Thanks for looking.
06-06-2010, 07:06 PM
denise ippolito
Cheryl, You should post this in Framing your Images w/ Words. Very nicely done. I think the vignette should be a bit larger? I see a spot by the beak:)
06-06-2010, 07:47 PM
Cheryl Slechta
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Denise, I saw the spot as I was posting - I thought it might be on my monitor:o Is this better?
06-06-2010, 07:59 PM
denise ippolito
Cheryl, My monitor was so dirty that I was cleaning dust bunnies that weren't there-so I can relate:)Looks better.
06-06-2010, 08:47 PM
Christopher Miller
Hi Cheryl, Love the pose here! It's so graceful. :) Nice effect. I would just lighten the eye a bit.
06-06-2010, 09:07 PM
Patti Edens
Cheryl,
Very Holga! You got the blur, vignette and funky colors! As mentioned, the pose is so nice and I love your words.
Patti
06-07-2010, 07:06 AM
Lance Peters
nice one cheryl - Dont think Ha's and exposure apply here :)
06-07-2010, 02:38 PM
Arthur Morris
I love the effect. It looks as if you have photographed a carving. I gotta admit though that the head angle bugs me--bad ones always do. I am with Denise on adding canvas all around and increasing the darker areas of the vignetting.
06-07-2010, 03:08 PM
Kerry Perkins
Hi Cheryl, I think you got a handle on the look of the Holga. Agree with comments about the vignette and I might take some off the bottom to square it up a bit. Good work!
06-07-2010, 07:13 PM
Steve Adkins
HI Cheryl, Wonderful mood and I like the graceful departure angle :)
06-08-2010, 11:20 AM
Anita Bower
I really don't know what a Holga looks like. I love the words you wrote to go with this image, and the processing of the image fits with the words. I do wish the bird were in a more upright position.