What an interesting, mind-expanding theme:) I used a sunflower, converted to b&w (I think by using hue and
saturation layer, then soft focus in Nik. I know it's dark in the center - maybe too much?
Thanks for looking. Comments and suggestions are much appreciated.
03-09-2010, 09:23 PM
Julie Brown
Hi Cheryl.
I think the darkness accentuates the pattern in the center. The whole effect looks like some sort of jewels on fabric. :cool:
03-09-2010, 09:26 PM
Cheryl Slechta
Thanks, Julie. This week is definitely a challenge:)
03-09-2010, 11:26 PM
Barbara Kile
Cheryl, you have nice contrast in the center - it's not too dark IMO. You have a pleasing composition and I love the flowing petals. For me, I would like to see the vignette extend a tad more to the bottom of the frame. If you're using Nik, you can move the center point.
03-10-2010, 12:01 AM
Jackie Schuknecht
Like it Cheryl, the center does look like tiny beads/jewels on Fabric. I think you are right, probably the toughest assignment to date IMO as well.
03-10-2010, 11:48 AM
denise ippolito
Cheryl, The center doesn't look too dark to me. I think you did a really nice job w/ the theme and the processing. Soft and delicate w/ a nice amount of detail.
03-10-2010, 02:32 PM
Julie Kenward
Very interesting effect, Cheryl. I'm not sure I love the white hotness around the edges but the center is to die for. Maybe a bit more DOF on the top of the center area as they seem less sharp than the rest - but still a very interesting image.
03-10-2010, 05:12 PM
Nicki Gwynn Jones
H Cheryl,
I love the centre of this - just like beads! Might like to see a little more detail in the petals.
Best,
Nicki
03-10-2010, 08:47 PM
Paul Lagasi
Well done, good usage of a sunflower centre, I'd also like to see the petal all around but lovely image
03-10-2010, 08:59 PM
Cheryl Slechta
Thanks everyone for your comments. They are much appreciated:)
03-11-2010, 05:20 PM
Anita Bower
i think the center looks great, but does seem a bit too different than the surrounding areas. perhaps if the surrounding petals were darker, or the center was lighter? :)
03-13-2010, 01:16 PM
Kerry Perkins
Hi Cheryl - I like this as presented and think the lighter center could be another option. Like the interesting pattern of the flower center. Just as a personal preference, when doing a b&w or duotone image I like to keep the peak whites at around 245 and not let them go to 255. Well done, and this is a tough theme!