From our recent trip to the frigid sunshine state... Grace and I setup on a ibis flight path at Waco while Ted and Terry were alligator watching as the sun was setting. I was lucky enough to get a juvi pass.
Thanks for looking,
Lou
MKIII, 500F4 F6.3 @640 (AV +1) no flash
01-11-2010, 07:48 PM
Phil Ertel
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Hi Lou, Nice flying pose in nice light. Your image appears nicely exposed and sharp. I like the angled flight towards us with good eye contact. I also like the sky with the hint of clouds. Compositionally I would place the bird in the upper left hand corner of the frame. Hope you do not mind but I took your image into photoshop an tried one of the techniques in Robert O'Toole's ATATPS 2 to Increase lead room without cropping. Hopefully I have done his instruction justice. Something to consider. Thanks for sharing.
01-11-2010, 08:34 PM
Grace Scalzo
Hummmm. I rather like Lou's comp with the wisps of clouds behind the bird and the slight look back. It's a bit unconventional but to my taste, it's nice. You really nailed this bird, Lou, and with a mk3 no less. ;)
01-11-2010, 09:28 PM
LouBuonomo
Phil,
No worries, my comp was because of the clouds, I felt there was enough space for the bird to fly into already.
Nice job with the canvas extension..
Lou
01-11-2010, 09:30 PM
Axel Hildebrandt
Something in between the two crops would work best for me. I like the wing position and angle and would tone down the highlights a bit.
01-11-2010, 11:31 PM
Todd Frost
Nice flight pose and agree with Axel on something in between the two. Exposure and detail look fine.
Todd
01-13-2010, 12:18 PM
James Salywoda
I like the wing position captured Lou a very nice shot. I think the repost with the added space works well.