Hi Bibhav,
I like the flight angle on your bird...a few points to consider...composition wise, I would give it more room at the top and at the bottom, its a tad tight. also would crop from the right side of the frame about 1/4...the mid-tones need to be adjusted and would consider lightening the area around the eyes and the under wings too. you have good details in the feathers. The eye could use a bit more sharpening...looking forward to your next one...:cool:
07-28-2009, 07:50 PM
Bob Miller
Hi Bibhav....Nice wing angle. I agree with Gus and would suggest a highlight / shadow adjustment in photoshop. Hope to see more of your work!
07-28-2009, 07:55 PM
Ron Boisvert
Hello Bibhav,
It sounds like you had quite an aerial show to photograph! If you decide to rework your image per Gus's recommendation, have a go at the dust spots too, at least 3 of them. You might want to clean your sensor. I'll bet if you follow Gus's suggestions, you'll like this image even more. Great first post and nice work!
07-29-2009, 02:09 AM
Lance Peters
HI - Agree with Gus's fine critique - looking forward to seein gmore :)