Seems like coots are the only birds I am getting interesting pictures of these days...
I am not happy with the BG on this (too much green?), but have been unsuccessful in finding an adjustment that improves it notably. Any suggestions?
Canon 50D 100-400mm @ 340mm
f5.6 1/1000 ISO500
07-25-2009, 06:03 PM
Harold Davis
i dont mind the bg at all. i might try to lighten the faces/eyes on each of the birds. another nice interaction image! i like the compo a lot!
07-25-2009, 06:12 PM
Ron Boisvert
Hi Gordon,
If you want to modify or tone down the green you could select it with Select-Color Range-copy to a layer, and then use Selective Color to work on the yellow. I'm not sure what you would consider an improvement, though. If it were my shot, I would look to improve the detail on the heads and around the eyes. Also, I believe the right side of your histogram is too far to the left.
I can really sense the action with all the water flying all over the place. I think coots are a hoot! Ugh, sorry about that folks, couldn't resist...
Keep them coming!
07-25-2009, 09:03 PM
Alfred Forns
Agree with solid comments and can add I would like more room Birds feel tight in frame, they are motoring fast and need some room !!!! Great action !!!
07-25-2009, 10:03 PM
Lance Peters
Hi Gordon - love the action - on my screen looks a tad under exposed - or you were shooting in mixed light.
Would lighten the head and try to lighten the eyes and add a touch of sharpening - Agree with AL does feel a little tight some more room up front would help.
Keep them coming :)
07-26-2009, 10:27 AM
Gordon McKechnie
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Thanks, all. Okay, sounds like it was only me who had an issue with BG, so I have reassessed my opinion!
For 2nd attempt, I have added more space in front, sharpened & lightened heads, & lightened whole image slightly
I'm definitely learning a lot since joining BPN - thanks for all the help
07-26-2009, 01:33 PM
Ron Boisvert
The repost is much better, Gordon. Nice work!
07-27-2009, 08:02 PM
Gus Cobos
Hi Gordon,
Very nice capture...agree with the techs...would also like to see more room all the way around, it's a tad tight in frame...looking forward to your next one...:cool: