I took this in Wyoming about three weeks ago. Having never seen one displaying I was taken with it's beauty. I was wondering however, about the blue cast to his head. Is this normal?
The display looks great. It looks a bit undersaturated and the blades of grass in the foreground are a bit distracting. I would put the bird further to the right in the frame.
07-22-2008, 11:25 AM
Daniel Cadieux
The blue on the head here is normal. The image is quite bright and you could raise the colour temperature just a bit.
07-23-2008, 09:32 AM
Arthur Morris
Two very good critiques above. I would add that the whole image is too light. There are lots of ways to darken it. If you need some help with that, please let us know.
07-23-2008, 03:07 PM
Wheeler McDougal Jr.
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Thank you all for your suggestions. I am submitting a repost with what I think is a vastly improved image using your suggestions, please let me know whether there is more that can be done or that I have gone down the wrong path. Thank you again for your help.
07-24-2008, 10:24 AM
Daniel Cadieux
I do think the repost is better, at least colour-wise. The darks could go darker though (again, there a few ways to do this), but this is certainly headed in the right direction :-) I still have nothing on displaying male turleys, good for you to get this!
07-24-2008, 02:56 PM
Arthur Morris
Rather than darkening the image, it appears that you have changed the color temp...
07-24-2008, 05:21 PM
Wheeler McDougal Jr.
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How is this repost. This time I darkened the image as Artie suggested. Hope it is better. Thanks again for your thoughts.