Hi all. Been busy putting a website together, but still managing to get out as much as I can. Here's a Royal Spoonbill I photographed recently. Not as pretty as the Roseate variety, but that's all we have here in Brisbane.
D500/500PF. 1/1600th sec@f5.6, iso800, manual mode. Basic adjustments in PS and cropped for presentation. Thanks as always for looking and commenting.
09-14-2021, 02:55 AM
Colin Driscoll
Great pose with lifted foot and eye contact. The strong BG does seem to overpower the bird a bit though.
09-14-2021, 06:42 AM
Kurt Bowman
Love the leg lift pose! Great job on the whites. I don't find the BG a problem at all. It just gives the image a HK feel IMO. Very nicely done Paul! BTW, I like seeing this different species
09-14-2021, 07:17 AM
Paul Burdett
Thanks so much Colin and Kurt...appreciate the feedback.
09-14-2021, 01:29 PM
Daniel Cadieux
Neat subject, and the raised foot adds interest. Good clean beach. I do feel the image is a touch bright overall, and maybe a bit tight comp-wise. BTW, perfect head angle here.
09-14-2021, 01:40 PM
Arthur Morris
Love the eye and that yellow spot! The bird and the raised foot rock! Low would likely have been better.
with love, artie
09-14-2021, 03:49 PM
Brian Sump
Paul, a neat view of this SB. I've not seen one and certainly different from the Roseate here in the US.
Lots of positives here; great pose and eye contact with the raised foot, nice clean bkg.
I think it has lots of potential. Do agree to loosen the crop just a touch and you might also look at adding a couple points of warmth and even magenta, of course compared with how you actually saw it.
Also, worth a look to mask the subject in PS and maybe selectively darken the bkg just a little to create separation on the subject. I could also use a slight bit more sharpening, esp in the face and legs/feet.
TFS!
09-14-2021, 11:36 PM
Paul Burdett
Thanks Daniel, Artie & Brian...will look into the suggestions. Cheers.
09-15-2021, 10:10 AM
John Mack
Cool looking spoonbill. The black legs/bill and white feathers go great together.
09-15-2021, 03:19 PM
Paul Burdett
Hi John. Thank you for the kind feedback. Cheers.
09-15-2021, 07:33 PM
Jay Ing
Nice frame. Don't know this bird at all but that face! Great.
09-16-2021, 03:21 AM
Paul Burdett
Thanks Jay:S3:
09-17-2021, 01:14 AM
Andreas Liedmann
Hi Paul ... neat looking subject and very difficult to deal with in this kinda location !!!
You did well under the given circumstances , I do like the pose and the right shooting angle .
I would prefer a wider crop for his " royalty " .....:w3
And I would try a real " high key approach " .... which means , all does go very bright and low contrast in the darker tones . I think the image , due to its nature , is crying to try it and see how it goes .
Personally I would separate the subject from the surrounding and work on both slightly different ... meaning going very bright in the surrounding and keeping a " ghostly " subject .
For sure an artistic approach ....
TFS Andreas
09-17-2021, 01:32 AM
Paul Burdett
Hi Andreas. Thank you for the feedback and suggestions. Actually the original was a wider crop, but I took some off the right hand side as I felt it was too much, but as Daniel and you have commented, the original 12x8 crop might be better. There have been a few background/foreground suggestions here, so I might try them. Cheers.