Hello everyone. Thank you for your comments and suggestions to my previous post , as always much appreciated.
Posting another overboard image, experimented on the field to get the outcome.
Open to all your opinions of any nature.
DPP 4.12, PSCC 2020, Curves, BW conversion , cropped three sides and very slightly extended the canvas at the base.
Canon 1DX MK II, Canon 200-400 @ 400mm, Bean Bag.
ss 1/1000, f/5.6, iso 320.
Haseeb.
11-10-2020, 04:45 AM
Jonathan Ashton
I like it! The composition works well for me and I like the tones. Did you go B&W be cause of the mist? I ask because I am curious to see if a colour version would be even better.
11-10-2020, 05:59 AM
Steve Kaluski
Hi Haseeb, certainly different and I like it.
For me a tad more below and a sliver more tonal range just for faction more separation in the BKG, adding that missing layering. Should the bird go, I'm 50/50.
TFS
Steve
11-10-2020, 06:06 AM
haseeb badar
Hi Jon -- Thank you for your comment.
I opted for BW as i already made use of the setting sun light and captured a few colour versions.
Here is a link of the colour image that i posted here on BPN.
Hi Steve -- there can be more at the base and reg the bird was 50/50 on it and then chose the other 50 and kept it.
11-10-2020, 01:07 PM
Sanjeev Aurangabadkar
Hi Haseeb, I like the scene and comp a lot. B&W works well. The grey mountains adda nice touch.
11-11-2020, 06:29 AM
Andreas Liedmann
Hi Haseeb ... a really nice B&W elephantscape .
Love the overall dimensions of the " small elephants " and the vast landscape .
Only thing is , that i would liked a bit more foreground .... but naturally , not artificially extended :w3:t3
Good to see different approaches !!!!!
TFS Andreas
11-12-2020, 08:38 AM
haseeb badar
Thank you Doc and Andreas, much appreciated.
11-13-2020, 02:19 AM
Bretoteanu Dan
Really like your composition Haseeb, b/w is just perfect. I like the mood and the subtle layering of the slopes from left to right and the diagonal ray of light. Still I think a bit more space in FG wouldnt hurt. Cant make my mind up about the bird though:)