Originally Posted by
Dennis Bishop
I really like your sky and applaud your creativity. The birds seem a bit stark to me, so I lightened them a bit with the help of a luminosity mask and liked that better, but that could just be me. I think the Route 66 sign was a good idea because it provides some depth, and the tones in the sky nicely point toward it. Maybe because of the relative size of it and the birds, I wonder about having it in front of the flock. The second sign at an angle puzzles me a bit but that could be a good thing.