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Nikon D70, 300 AF F/4, 1.4 TC, -7/3 EV, 1/4000, F14, ISO 200
Welcome Michael, The birds are sharp and it is always a good idea to grtry and include the hills and mountains in the BKGR but the image has many problems... Very poor wing positions on the top two birds. Burned highlights on the upper wing surfaces of at least the bottom bird. The merge of the bottom bird with the mountain. The birds are flying slightly away from you. Keep on practicing and studying and you will improve quickly.
Hi Michael,
As Artie mentioned...........tough light and wing positions............but I do remember my first time there...........I can't tell you how many times I did the same exact thing! Worse yet.....I was shooting film! Boy was my garbage can full after that trip. You were close on these!
Like the BG and the idea of the stack 'o geese but I agree with Artie on the light and the flight angle.
Also the sky is way too saturated.
Robert
