I was just working on blurs on the w/e. I used the 100mm macro. 2 sec exposure, ISO 50. Minimally processed with a texture and tonal contrast added. Full frame. I would be interested to see if you think this works.
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I was just working on blurs on the w/e. I used the 100mm macro. 2 sec exposure, ISO 50. Minimally processed with a texture and tonal contrast added. Full frame. I would be interested to see if you think this works.
I love Chinese Lanterns! They are one of the things that remind me of my childhood in upstate NY. I think you captured very well their delicateness and a gentle sense of motion as if in a breeze. Good interesting diagonal composition and lovely soft greenish-yellow bkgd that works beautifully with the oranges. I have read that an odd number of items is more visually interesting that an even number. But I think that bottom partially shown darker lantern really is important to this composition and grounds the other lighter lanterns. What is "w/e"?
Nancy, I think she means "weekend". :c3:
Jackie, I just love the softness and subtle treatment of this image. The composition works wonderfully and OOF elements in the background make a lovely understatement of the primary subjects. Nice!
Got it: w/e = weekend! This must be a text shorthand. I'm still just using my cell phone for talking :Whoa!:!
Very nice image Jackie. Nice soft feel and colors. The diagonal as Nancy notes is also good for the comp. I just got a 100 and can't wait to get out and try it out. Our flowers just bloomed this past week, so I hope to do so soon. But again, nice work ... as usual. :S3:
I find this image very inspiring Jackie, and the first words that came to my mind while viewing were " magical" and "illusion". Beautiful composition and colours, love the softness - this certainly works for me, minimally processed indeed but to achieve maximum effect:w3, stunning work!
Kind regards,
Lovely, soft, magical image, Jackie:S3:
Beautiful! I just love the soft feel and the pastel colors. The composition is very pleasing too with the lanterns forming a gentle curve across the image. My only critique is that the image does look a little tight to me on the left side, but it is very well done!
I liked it when I saw the thumbnail. The colors and softness are wonderful, and the blur puts it over the top. Because my eye goes left to right, I'd flip it horizontally, but it's a great image the way it is.
Good idea Dennis, I think it looks better.Quote:
Originally Posted by Dennis Bishop
I'm always surprised that a simple flip does make an image feel a bit different. I do like it this direction!
I think it works well (and I'm usually not fond of blurs). I like that the blur is slight. The soft colors go with the soft look. Both versions work for me. I like how you placed the stem in the frame, and the crop. You might consider lightening the darker area of the lowest lantern. Nice work.
