I took this photo at Longwood Gardens a few weeks ago.
Processed in Elements 10: Skew & crop; clone imperfections; levels; selective lighten and darken; Shadows/Highlights; selective desaturation; warming Photo Filter; texture by Kim Klassen; Omni lighting in center; Color Efex Pro: Polarization and Vignette Blur.
I'm bothered by the outer petals right and left--but not sure why.
Constructive critique requested! :-)
10-30-2012, 10:21 AM
Dennis Bishop
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When I first looked at this, Anita, I tried to see why you might be bothered by the outer petals. I like them, but my vision of a rose tends to be of something that's soft and delicate. Finally, I realized that my attention was focused on that strong ring of yellow. When I desaturated the yellow some, the outer petals seemed better incorporated into the image, make it more harmonious. Reducing the saturation of the yellow really made the pinks stand out, so I backed off the saturation of the red channel a bit, too but a smaller amount.
To me, it also made the curve of the petals easier to appreciate.
10-30-2012, 01:11 PM
Cheryl Slechta
Anita, I think Dennis hit the nail on the head:S3:
10-30-2012, 06:37 PM
Anita Bower
Thank you so much, Dennis and Cheryl. You solved my problem. :-)
10-30-2012, 07:16 PM
Paul Lagasi
Dennis made some good changes but I've always liked bold and colorful...nice work Anita
10-31-2012, 11:29 AM
Hazel Grant
I like Dennis' softness, too. I think perhaps, Anita, that is sort of what you wanted to accomplish, too or it wouldn't have bothered you. The pinks is yours is a bit neon....but then, living in a university town, I can see where the brighter colors would thrill some of our residents, so it's, again, all in the vision.
11-01-2012, 06:30 AM
Anita Bower
I appreciate the thoughtful comments. I toned it down as per Dennis' suggestion and was happier with the result. I do love bright colors, but can go overboard.:bg3:
11-02-2012, 01:29 PM
Bob Miller
HI Anita...just want to give you a vote for the OP! Lovely work!