Into the box

I saw this commercial for sominex that kept running on the Tv and thought it should ....next time it came on......play in the bed. This is from my long ago archives and I was wondering what people thought.....so ...all comments welcome!

Interesting. It would have fit the surreal category we had recently.

Bob, This is a great example of OOTB thinking. I like the way the LLC flows but I wonder if a less centered main subject would work, I did a crop let me know your thoughts.

I agree, very creative. Can't see Denises crop though.

Hi Denise....Thanks for your feedback. I do think your crop improves the flow of the composition. Thanks!

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Originally Posted by Dave Woeller

I agree, very creative. Can't see Denises crop though.

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Hi Dave, When I first posted my repost it didn't come up- so I tried again and it went through. I think we were posting around the same time :)

Hi, Bob, really nice OOTB thinking. I think Denise's crop improves on an already nice image:S3:

I really like your image, very creative! I like Denise's crop best.

Very creative and fun Bob, great OOTB thinking!