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allanrube
06-23-2012, 08:34 AM
I took this image a few weeks ago early in the morning. There are a few things that bother me about the image.

D800 with 600 VR and 1.4tc iso 1000 1/1000 at 5.6

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Randy Stout
06-23-2012, 08:43 AM
Allan:

I like it overall, with nice comp, good exposure and sharpness. Shooting angle. The two issues for me, both minor, I think the bird could go a bit brighter, and I might smooth that horizontal band in the background a bit, with some very light clone stamp work.

Cheers

Randy

Joe Senzatimore
06-23-2012, 09:03 AM
The BG color is awsome. sets off the bird very well. Maybe a bit of work on the light colored band , as mentioned, might help an already fine image.

rajojomanik
06-23-2012, 10:40 AM
Looks good to me, lovely background, low angle and exposure.

jack williamson
06-23-2012, 12:44 PM
Very good quality, the bird could be a little brighter, bg colors are great. The lighter color band above the knees addressed.

Jack

rajandesai
06-23-2012, 01:07 PM
Looks good to me. Love the low angle and walking pose. I might darken the mid tones a bit. Where was this taken?

allanrube
06-23-2012, 01:45 PM
Thanks for the comments. I will lighten the bird and try to work on the background band (may leave as I could make it worse.)

Rajan, this was at Sandy Point.

gail bisson
06-23-2012, 06:13 PM
I really like this shot. Maybe a bit more blacks to add some punch to the bird and a slight more head turn but otherwise I really like it,
Gail

PhilCook
06-23-2012, 06:34 PM
Nothing more to add, really I don't think it needs much improvement at all, if anything....great image !

christopher galeski
06-24-2012, 03:45 AM
very nice image,nice lighting,like the color.is it me,but is the bird a tad noisey.thanks.

allanrube
06-24-2012, 07:41 AM
Christopher, that is what bothered me. I will have to go back to the raw. Me thinks I used a bit too much detail extractor (Color Efex Pro.)

Frank Schauf
06-26-2012, 11:28 AM
Beautiful portrait, great details and sharpness.