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Frank Schauf
06-23-2012, 05:14 AM
Preening oneself
1DMIV, EF600, 1/1600 sec, f/6.3, ISO 400, bean bag
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Ofer Levy
06-23-2012, 05:28 AM
Nice shooting angle, excellent exposure control and nice pose. Maybe crop a bit tighter as there is a bit too much of the shore in the frame for my tatse.
Randy Stout
06-23-2012, 06:11 AM
Frank:
I agree with Ofer's comments. Lovely bird, exposure, sharpness, but the rocky shore, although interesting, tends to compete with the bird for our attention.
Cheers
Randy
Joe Senzatimore
06-23-2012, 09:06 AM
I too believe a tighter crop would improve this. The exposure and detail captured is excellent. Very elegant pose.
Frank Schauf
06-23-2012, 10:05 AM
Thank you.
These times, crop a bit tighter.
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rajojomanik
06-23-2012, 10:49 AM
Tack sharp, well exposed and great pose. Tigher crop made it even better.
jack williamson
06-23-2012, 12:37 PM
A beauty for sure. Great quality, repost looks good.
Jack
Grace Scalzo
06-23-2012, 09:02 PM
I mostly like your original compostion. I'd take a bit off the bottom and a bit off the left. The shell under his tail would be evicted were this mine as it looks a bit like poop. (sorry!) Otherwise, I like the preening pose, nice exposure. I feel like your repost has the bird too centered.
PhilCook
06-25-2012, 02:32 AM
I tend to agree with Grace, the crop has made the subject too central in the repost. While I can understand suggestions the rocky shore may compete with the bird....looking at it in a different way, I find the rocky shoreline compliments the bird by revealing a little of the natural environment...ih ...personal tastes I guess
Nice sharp and well exposed image Frank, the preening pose adds a feeling of grace and serenity.
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