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Dawn Miller
04-30-2012, 09:15 PM
The rain came plunging drenching after drought
and silence burst as sensual groaning frogs
released at once from dry encysted sleeps
began the rhythms sounded so beneath
the world's first trees. Bromeliads and palms
embraced their roots in waters filled with songs -
but long ago. Tonight in twilight I
am standing at the edge of time and pond,
peering like a primate at the sounds
that pulse and surge from shadowed reeds and roots.
Somehow the blood and feet take up the beat.
But on the edge of plunging I retreat
withdrawing from the memories of bones
to faintly hear, within our walls, their songs. - by Dawn L. C. Miller

denise ippolito
05-01-2012, 07:58 AM
Dawn, this is a wonderful piece. I love the the way the words flow and the image is a perfect fit. Lovely!

Dennis Bishop
05-01-2012, 05:30 PM
A double whammy. A nicely composed image with beautiful lighting accompanied by an exceptional poem. They're wonderful together.

Cheryl Slechta
05-04-2012, 10:59 AM
Dawn, thank you! The poem is lovely and is perfect with the image. I hope you have more to share:S3:

Gabriela Plesea
03-07-2015, 07:19 AM
Just lovely, Dawn!

I enjoyed viewing this image and took great delight in reading your beautifully composed poem!

Kind regards,