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Ian Cassell
04-09-2012, 10:53 AM
Canon 7D
Sigma 10-20mm f/4-5.6 @ 13mm
1/125 sec f/11 ISO 100

Crop for composition, conversion to B/W, sharpening in CS5

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Robert Amoruso
04-09-2012, 08:13 PM
Ian,

I would have preferred the crop at top to be more open and not cut off the diagonal line of trees TR.

Try a s-curve and amp up the whites some. I tried it and it makes the BG trees pop.

A would sharpen some more.

Nice leading line with the water. I feel amping up contrast gives it a nice graphic quality.

Andrew McLachlan
04-10-2012, 06:35 PM
Hi Ian, I too would like to see a little more up top. I like the way the river is entering the scene and wonder if a vertical comp would have emphasized this element of the scene differently.

Don Lacy
04-11-2012, 10:34 AM
Robert has some great suggestions would like to see you repost the image with the corrections

Hazel Grant
04-12-2012, 01:33 PM
A color version of this might be a good candidate for the current out of the box challenge.

Ian Cassell
04-12-2012, 01:57 PM
Thanks. When I get a chance, I'll play with it a bit. I never really liked it in color.