View Full Version : Theme Chestnut collared Sparrow
Richard Unsworth
04-02-2012, 10:29 AM
Created in the gardens of Savegre Mountain Lodge, Costa Rica
Bit tight but still pretty; was shot close/tight. Love the flower species, anyone know what it is?
Cute birds and glad I got a shot of them though they are common
7D 100-400 ISO 640 1/200 f 5.6 Ev 0
DPP for raw, Topaz NR, PDS for WB etc
Sachin Saraf
04-02-2012, 10:44 AM
Richard I have never seen one before..nice setting and IQ looks great the perch shows advent of spring season...Sparrow is little too big in frame for my taste...I would back out on sharpening a bit...
Don Lacy
04-02-2012, 11:09 AM
Beautiful subject with a nice pose and HA. Agree with it being to tight in the frame and a tad over sharpen
Munish Kaushik
04-02-2012, 11:12 AM
Nice perch, bg & sharp subject. Love the feather details there. Sparrow looks bigger that its size.
Richard Unsworth
04-02-2012, 11:19 AM
Hi
OK had another creative (lol) g; as I said was shot a bit close. I have added to top and bottom, and reduced SS
Appreciate your posts
Ryan Schain
04-02-2012, 02:00 PM
Even with the repost, I still find the bird too tight in the frame. The head angle is also not ideal, where a look more downward and to the right (your left), would have strengthened this image greatly. Sharpness and background look good on the repost, but the plant obstructing the tail is distracting.
Richard Unsworth
04-02-2012, 02:52 PM
Points noted Ryan, thank you for your critique
(things to think on next time) - not to worry though I have many more :S3:
Karl Egressy
04-02-2012, 02:57 PM
Nice head turn, excellent details.
Dave Leroy
04-02-2012, 03:08 PM
Interesting looking bird with lovely colors. Other than tail also a nice clean shot with lovely bg. Repost looks better although I might add a bit on right as well. Good for you to get a bird you wanted.
gail bisson
04-02-2012, 04:47 PM
Hi Richard,
repost is better. I can see some cloning marks in LLC and under bird's right foot.. I know you love the flower but it overpowers the bird and hides the tail. Please show us some more of this lovely bird,
Gail
Frank Schauf
04-03-2012, 06:19 AM
Beautiful portrait, great details and eye contact.
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