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Judy Howle
03-31-2012, 09:23 AM
This was the view to the north at the same sunset as the previous image. I used Lightroom 4 and Nik Color Efex 4 Tonal Contrast.
5D Mark II, f/4.5 @ 32 mm, 1/200, ISO 200

Rachel Hollander
04-01-2012, 06:59 AM
Judy - I prefer the previous image, it feels more dramatic with the darker areas of the sky. This one is still nice, just not as dramatic. What's the red line at the shore near the middle? I find it drawing my attention a bit.

TFS,
Rachel

Judy Howle
04-01-2012, 01:41 PM
Thanks Rachel. That's a beach. I should have removed it.

Robert Amoruso
04-02-2012, 08:40 AM
Great use of diagonals in the clouds Judy to act as leading lines.

I would suggest some cropping off the bottom - to just above the larger waves - to where the waves are not so pronounced.

Andrew Aveley
04-13-2012, 09:44 AM
Robert has offered some great advise, Maybe a little clockwise rotation.....(tiny bit), Also colours are very strong here so, maybe less saturation? TFS