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Mark Young
03-24-2012, 05:40 AM
Hello everyone, it's been some time since I was here last. :wave: Here's one of a Tattler I took about a month ago. I quite like the pose, but I wonder if the water is just a tad too blue?

Canon 7D 300f4+1.4tc ISO200 1/400 f7.1 Av mode Ev metering.
Slight crop, I can't remember what other PP work I did.

Lynn David Cole
03-24-2012, 10:25 AM
Composition is good except it would be nice to have a tad more space at the top.
You also might try pulling down the highlights a little and boosting the clarity (mid-tone contrast).
I like the blue and if you reduce the overall exposure it will become deeper and darker, so the bird will stand out even more.
Nice capture.
Thanks for posting.
Lynn

wendell westfall
03-24-2012, 01:36 PM
Like the way the foot is raised . . . the blue water is perfect for me . . . the bird could be a bit more "contrasty" -- darker and sharper.

Mark Young
03-24-2012, 07:54 PM
Thanks guys for the suggestions.

Here is a repost with less highlights and more mid tone contrast, what do you think?

arash_hazeghi
03-25-2012, 01:52 AM
sweet pose and light I like how he is balancing himself. repost is an improvement and I'd sharpen it more TFS

Ofer Levy
03-25-2012, 07:25 AM
Very nice image Mark! I also like the repost and agree with Arash re more sharpening.