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decio carvalho
02-14-2012, 06:55 AM
Canon eos7d,EF17-40mm (17mm)ISO:100,F22,EV-1,1/250,MM:Evaluative mode,Manual focus.

http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6156/6182401561_422cacd1b1_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/wildlifephotographer/6182401561/)

Robert Amoruso
02-14-2012, 10:40 PM
I like the idea here and the sun burst due to the f/22 aperture.

I would have preferred the sun not as close to the edge left and top - a more rule of thirds placement.

Also consider that at least to me, the strongest elements in the image are in the left half of the frame - the sun, small point of land and the arcing cloud. I vertical framed image using ROT would have been a good option here.

Keep them coming.

Don Railton
02-14-2012, 11:33 PM
I agree with Robert here, the sun looks jammed into the corner and the starburst effect is truncated because of this. Maybe recomposed facing slightly more to the left would have been better. I do like the wispy cloud floating above the other and the blue gradient in the sky...

DON.

Morkel Erasmus
02-16-2012, 03:14 PM
I also like the idea, but not so much the execution. I want a little more land to 'anchor' the image, although the cloud-bank should be the focal point. Robert made some good points about the placement of the sun and I agree with him.