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Cheryl Arena Molennor
02-12-2012, 05:50 PM
Shot this a few yrs back at a local rookery. added canves to top
Canon 40D
300 mm 2.8Llens w/2x
ISO 320 f8 @1/250

dankearl
02-12-2012, 06:17 PM
Sharp and nice exposure on the whites.
The BG is a bit too bright for me.

Daniel Cadieux
02-12-2012, 08:19 PM
Interesting gap between the mandibles! Love the 'do and the breeding colours. Some fill would have been super, and I do wish you had pointed your lens a bit more to the right. I personally like the BG!

Dave Leroy
02-12-2012, 08:36 PM
I also like the bg and really like the nice colors of the bird. I think a bit of pp'n to brighten up the face area a bit in place of the fill would be nice. Very nice composition.

Cheryl Arena Molennor
02-12-2012, 09:38 PM
Interesting gap between the mandibles! Love the 'do and the breeding colours. Some fill would have been super, and I do wish you had pointed your lens a bit more to the right. I personally like the BG!
Thanks Daniel and Dave. I took your advice and brought up the bird some. that was tough pp because of the head feathers but I think this is better. WDYT?

Robert Holguin
02-13-2012, 12:53 AM
Beautiful image. Superb detail, I really like the background, and the repost looks much better.
Well done.

Stu Bowie
02-13-2012, 02:17 AM
Hi Cheryl, tack sharp, and just love the detail around the eye. Just enough neck shown to create the perfect portrait comp. The BG colours rock, as does your repost.

Don Nelson
02-13-2012, 02:40 AM
Repost is good. BG is excellent in both posts. I'd add just a little more on the top - its just a little too close for my taste.

Marina Scarr
02-13-2012, 12:17 PM
Repost looks very good. Agree on a tad more space on top but not a deal breaker. Good use of flash. You have nice details in the feathers and that BG rocks.

Doug Brown
02-13-2012, 01:29 PM
Really nice feather detail. I like the repost with the brighter whites, which looked somewhat gray in the OP. I would have preferred a slightly better head angle.

Carmelo Cannova
02-13-2012, 06:52 PM
That is on beautiful portrait set on an great BG. Beautiful details captured and well exposed highlights.

Carmelo

arash_hazeghi
02-14-2012, 12:31 AM
nice portrait Cheryl. I like the repost

Troy Lim
02-19-2012, 09:56 PM
Repost looks great, since you added canvas on top, I would add more to the right also.