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PRABIR BHATTACHARYYA
12-15-2011, 10:46 AM
A Little Bee Eater from dry Mopane forest of South Luangwa, Zambia.
50D, 400mm f/5.6L, 1/1000s, f/8, ISO-500, +0.7, Ap. Prio., September 2011.

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Had to take about 50% crop, since shot from about 13m distance
Raw conversion using LR3, JPEG processed in PSE9 and CS3 including cloning and content aware brushing to remove distractions.
A bit of negative space kept on the left side.

Thanks for advice, C&C.

Dan Busby
12-15-2011, 01:31 PM
Sweet bird Prabir. Gorgeous colours nicely processed and nice detail. I would consider removing the dead part of the left branch. I also see some irregularities around the beak.

Kaustubh Deshpande
12-15-2011, 02:30 PM
Prabir, I like the composition, light, exposure, BG and colors. The IQ did not hold up though. When you say 50%, are you saying 50% area or 50% on both sides. Latter would mean, you threw away 75% pixels...25%-of-the-orig crop, in other words.

Rod Warnock
12-15-2011, 04:17 PM
Great capture, Prabir !! Like the compostion a lot. Agree with Kaustubh on IQ.
TKS
Best regards
Rod Warnock

Arthur Morris
12-15-2011, 07:15 PM
A nicely designed image. The bird is a bit too dark/dense and a bit over-sharpened....

PRABIR BHATTACHARYYA
12-15-2011, 10:13 PM
Dan, Kaustabh, Rod, Arthur - thanks for your observations and comments.
Kaustabh, its 50% area crop.
Dan, I let the dead twig stay only to balance the area since otherwise I'd have had to go for a larger crop or a large negative space. But I will try and remove that twig to make it clutter free. I have also noticed that the beak has a small roundish thing at the tip. Could be some part of an insect...I couldn't make out since I was a little far away.
Arthur, I'll try and work on it more and tone down the sharpness a bit.
Thanks again.

Stu Bowie
12-16-2011, 01:01 AM
Hi Prabir, colours are spot on, and I like the pose and colour of the BG. I feel you wont harm this image by removing the twig in front of the BE. The space infront would be fine for him to look into. I agree this is matbe a touch oversharpened, as there is a halo at the back and tail of the BE.

PRABIR BHATTACHARYYA
12-16-2011, 02:16 AM
Stuart, thanks a lot for your observations & suggestions.

Arthur Morris
12-16-2011, 06:52 AM
Prabir, There is no way to "tone down" sharpening once it is applied. You need to start with your master file. BTW, you should NEVER EVER be sharpening your master files.... We sharpen only when an image is sized for final usage.

PRABIR BHATTACHARYYA
12-16-2011, 06:54 AM
Arthur, by toning down I meant I will do it on a conversion again. The original RAW still remains as it is.
Thanks again for your concern.

Arthur Morris
12-16-2011, 07:00 AM
Arthur, by toning down I meant I will do it on a conversion again. The original RAW still remains as it is.
Thanks again for your concern.

YAW but we are still not on the same page :). Proper workflow involves converting the image and doing what you choose to do in Photoshop and then saving a master file. (I save mine as TIFFs; other save them as PSDs.) Your master file should never be sharpened. It is your finished product waiting to be sized for whatever use and then sharpened after sizing. In this case you would simply go back to your master file, downsize it for BPN, and then sharpen it. (You should not have to re-convert and you certainly should be using very little if any sharpening during conversion.)

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PRABIR BHATTACHARYYA
12-16-2011, 08:13 AM
Thanks Arthur for a detailed info.

Arthur Morris
12-16-2011, 10:58 AM
You are most welcome. Thanks a stack for your membership support!

PRABIR BHATTACHARYYA
12-17-2011, 02:15 AM
Thanks Arthur.