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Bob Miller
11-29-2011, 09:32 PM
Went to Chincoteague island Va. at first light. The colors were just amazing !


Nikon D3s
ISO 200
1 sec at f22
16-35mm at 35mm

Robert Amoruso
11-30-2011, 12:43 PM
Bob,

I am not sure having more ont he left and right would improve the image - but I do find myself wondering.

As presented I like the framing and the FG arcing of the tidal pools.

Overall the image appear unsharp to me and I find the shadows distracting.

In the repost I used PS Shadow/Highlight correction to open unp the shadows as well as taming highlights somewhat (not too much as that makes them look dirty). I then sharpened it.

Andrew Aveley
11-30-2011, 01:51 PM
yip , tad soft and some little gremlins in the middle (dustbunies) great colours and think its just right

Jay Sheinfield
11-30-2011, 02:07 PM
Great colors, really like the repost. Well seen.

Roman Kurywczak
12-01-2011, 09:53 AM
Nice to see a landcape there Bob! I like the FG so maybe tweaking more there in the direction Robert took it? I have debated less sky to further emphasize the FG but not 100% on that one.

Bob Miller
12-01-2011, 04:54 PM
Thanks everyone ....great suggestions!
Robert...Thank you for the repost showing me the possibilities!

Morkel Erasmus
12-04-2011, 05:24 PM
mmhmm...many options here Bob...I love the colours and quite prefer the "softer" look of the OP to Robert's repost (can't remember how long ago I did not prefer a Robert Repost :w3) but I think here it's all about taste.
dust bunnies mentioned and the OP composition works for me as well, though I tend to stay away from square-ish crops myself.

Andrew McLachlan
12-09-2011, 05:50 PM
Hi Bob, agree with the above comments...well seen! Love the colors in the sky and the curve in the foreground sand too.

Grady Weed
12-11-2011, 06:31 PM
I like the re-post by Robert better myself. I brings out the various tones, greens in the water pool etc. A plus to me is the circular composition, the tidal pool, it added some more interest. Well done Bob.