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Hayath Mohammed
11-29-2011, 05:26 AM
A spot billed pelican scouting around late eveninghttps://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-4wM1ZLsjQjc/TqzsMo858uI/AAAAAAAARhw/BwZQ78m8LyU/IMG_3475.jpg

Canon 450D, Sigma 150-500 OS @500mm, f8, 1/640, -2/3 EV, Evaluative metering

Tamed highlights, use fill light, saturation, USM and contrast adjustments

Would love to hear your thoughts on this :)

Cheers,
Hayath

Ian Cassell
11-29-2011, 01:37 PM
Hi Hayath,

I like this. Nice exposure and HA and you preserved the whites well. I'm not sure the reflection adds much to the scene and, if it were mine, I would probably crop most of that off and, thus, make the bird larger in the frame. You might consider cleaning up the water surface a bit as well. If you brighten up they eye a bit, it will draw more viewer attention to the face (a small amount of fill-flash might have helped here).

Hayath Mohammed
11-29-2011, 01:51 PM
Thank you Ian for that detailed feedback. Now looking back at the shot, the eye region does look very dull/dead.
Reflection..well wanted to keep it since I thought the wavy look would break out nicely.

Appreciate your time :)

Cheers,
Hayath

anujgandhe
11-29-2011, 02:27 PM
lovely exp. agree about the reflection. not required as its not clear.

Hayath Mohammed
11-30-2011, 03:23 AM
Thank you Anuj! Shall try getting a better crop from this :)

Cheers,
Hayath