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PRABIR BHATTACHARYYA
11-29-2011, 02:05 AM
Female Impala with Red Billed Ox-peckers on its back at Mfuwe, South Luangwa, Zambia.
[50D, 400mm f/5.6L]
1/1600s, f/5.6, ISO-800, Aperture Priority, Hand held, from Safari Vehicle.
http://i1198.photobucket.com/albums/aa454/Prabir-2010/Impala.jpg
Thanks for C&C.
Rachel Hollander
11-29-2011, 08:53 AM
Nice light, detail and dof. The only thing I am unsure about is the comp. It feels like a bit too much room on the rhs, needs a little bit more room on top and I wish the lower oxpecker's tail wasn't clipped. A more pano crop with the lower oxpecker eliminated might work too.
TFS,
Rachel
Harshad Barve
11-30-2011, 02:18 AM
Improve the compo and you have winner here
TFS
PRABIR BHATTACHARYYA
11-30-2011, 04:14 AM
Rachel, Harshad - thanks a lot.
Morkel Erasmus
11-30-2011, 04:41 AM
This combination of animal/bird always provides great photographic opportunity.
I would increase contrast on the face of the impala slightly...and here is a suggested crop:
PRABIR BHATTACHARYYA
11-30-2011, 09:41 AM
Morkel, thanks a lot for your advice. I had made an almost similar modification last night, I am posting it here again. Please let me know if it works.
http://i1198.photobucket.com/albums/aa454/Prabir-2010/ImpalawithRedBilledOxPecker-mod.jpg
Thanks again.
Rachel Hollander
11-30-2011, 02:06 PM
Prabir - the comp is along the lines of what I was suggesting and I do like it with the additional room on top. Your repost is not as sharp as your OP or Morkel's. I think with the additional sharpening the repost will be great.
Rachel
PRABIR BHATTACHARYYA
11-30-2011, 10:13 PM
Thanks Rachel. I will carry out more sharpening on this as suggested.
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