Wren

[Kasra.Ha]

Canon500D, 400 f 5.6, 1/400 sec, f /7.1, iso 400.

We used "calling technique" to attract Wren.

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C&C always Most Welcome. Thanks for looking.

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[Stu Bowie]

Kasra, I like the inquisitive pose, as he has certainly responded to your calling. The angle of the pose is not ideal - getting him to pose at least parallel to you will help with your comp, as well as waiting for him to turn his head slightly towards you. I realise this is not always possible, as we have to take what we get. Your BG is great, and for this pose, I would consider a vertical crop.

[Marina Scarr]

Although I like the look on the bird's face, I wish you could have more of a side view of the bird. I am wondering if this bird is oversharpened. Is this the way the feathers looked?

You have a great background on this photo.

[Dan Busby]

Lovely background and great detail. Looks oversharpened to my eye.

[MohsenVahedipour]

Kasra,
I like the pose, open bill & BG. Great suggestions by Stuart.

[Kasra.Ha]

Kasra, I like the inquisitive pose, as he has certainly responded to your calling. The angle of the pose is not ideal - getting him to pose at least parallel to you will help with your comp, as well as waiting for him to turn his head slightly towards you. I realise this is not always possible, as we have to take what we get. Your BG is great, and for this pose, I would consider a vertical crop.

Stuart,Thank you very much for your helpful comments.

[Kasra.Ha]

Although I like the look on the bird's face, I wish you could have more of a side view of the bird. I am wondering if this bird is oversharpened. Is this the way the feathers looked?

You have a great background on this photo.

Marina,You're right when i was once again reviewed . it is too sharp.

After this I'm trying to correct.