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Valerio Tarone
10-15-2011, 12:00 PM
this is the third and last of a serie 'dandelions', i think is in more creative mood. 70mm macro f10 1/60 ISO250 wb daylight in PP: cropped the upper part OOF, more sharpness in UCM.
Thanks for critics

Rene Quenneville
10-15-2011, 08:18 PM
Valerio,

I like the concept but I am not sure about the overall composition. The brightest area being the upper left corners distracts me a bit. I also feel that there should be more sharpness on the buds, most of them are OOF. I am not a specialist in composition, It would be nice to get comments from the experts. Thank you for posting it. It forces us to step back and think.

Steve Maxson
10-16-2011, 10:53 AM
Hi Valerio. This one has a nice abstract quality to it and the sparkle on the fluffy seed "hairs" is a nice touch. I think I might like the comp better if you cropped about 3 cm off the bottom such that most of the black area was removed. :S3: This is quite subjective so it will be interesting to see what others chime in.

Valerio Tarone
10-16-2011, 01:48 PM
Thank you both Steve and René, I appreciate your advices. Can be classified as 'texture', I had been thinking to crop also there, yes ,OK, I've concerning not cut too texture.