View Full Version : Another busy day at the beach...
Brendan Dozier
10-09-2011, 04:20 PM
Overcast morning, ACR, CS5, crop, cloned out seals on rt, some seaweed & spots on seal, lightened open eye, added some saturation.
7D, EF70-200mm f/2.8L IS II USM +2.0x, HH
1/250
5.6
ISO 800
Tom Graham
10-09-2011, 05:35 PM
Overall, nice work. I might be tempted to crop a lot off of left side to put more emphasis on flippers and head.
Tom
Ofer Levy
10-09-2011, 06:19 PM
I love it - made me smile! I second Tom's suggestion.
Cheryl Arena Molennor
10-09-2011, 06:29 PM
That's a funny image. .love that you are at the same angle.
Marc Mol
10-09-2011, 07:30 PM
Love the thinking man's pose here Dumay! Great low angle with fine detail.:cheers:
TFS
Brendan Dozier
10-09-2011, 09:20 PM
Thanks, Tom, Ofer, Cheryl, & Marc, appreciate your comments & suggestions.
I went back and forth between the two crops last night, I think taking off the left does emphasize the scratching pose better, but I also liked the longer pano because it seemed to give a more lounging look to the seal.
Ofer Levy
10-09-2011, 09:30 PM
I like the repost but will crop off the bottom to get rid of the oof seaweed that don't add to this image IMHO - it will aslo help in getting a more 2:3 ratio.
Ken Watkins
10-09-2011, 09:45 PM
The repost is much better, for me at least.
Harshad Barve
10-09-2011, 11:25 PM
and yet another excellent image Brendon
TFS
RakeshDhareshwar
10-10-2011, 02:41 AM
Brilliant image , Brendon . Like the repost .
Rachel Hollander
10-10-2011, 09:38 AM
Brendan - I prefer the repost but maybe with a tad more room on the rhs if you have it. Great pov, detail and pose.
TFS,
Rachel
Steve Kaluski
10-10-2011, 10:37 AM
Hi Brendan, nice chuckle to this, occasionally it's nice to have a bit of humour to an image.
The repost is better and I guess there are many variables on cropping this. Personally I would keep the edges clean (straight) with no vignetting and if you were to lose a bit off the foot of the image I might just take it to the seaweed as there is an imaginary horizontal line already there, anything more perhaps would be too tight. Also if you felt the urge I might just remove the OOF seaweed in the BKG above and just have a clean top half.
TFS
Steve
Pieter de Waal
10-10-2011, 03:09 PM
You seem to have had fun with the seals Brendan. Like the colours and texture of the wet fur. The expression is nicely captured and says it all and I feel the seaweed adds to the image.
Morkel Erasmus
10-11-2011, 03:32 PM
Super low angle and pose here Brendan! They sure gave you some good images...
I think the ideal crop for me is somewhere between OP and RP...:bg3:
I second Steve's suggestion to crop from the bottom somewhat and to lose the vignette.
DanWalters
10-11-2011, 08:21 PM
Nice low angle and eye contact. Like the sand on the seal as well. Adds some nice texture to the image.
Brendan Dozier
10-12-2011, 12:01 AM
Thanks folks, much appreciated! It's laughable how much time I obsessed over this image and how to crop it. Want you to know that I considered just about all the suggestions as I was working on it. Most of the time, I think simplifying the image is usually the way to go, but sometimes I try to push myself to try different approaches I might not normally do. I do appreciate everyone's feedback, and am learning a lot from you.
Steve Canuel
10-12-2011, 09:28 PM
Neat pose Brendan. I actually prefer the OP. I like the sand on the belly and how it leads to the fin and I also like the bit of color provided by the seaweed.
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