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Jay Sheinfield
09-26-2011, 10:38 AM
Another abandoned mining camp dwelling. Simplify, mostly. Shadow work and a slice off the right. Hope you like it...............
Roman Kurywczak
09-26-2011, 01:47 PM
Hey Jay,
Nicely composed and very nice use of the filters! Depending on mood....may go brighter....but all in all well done!
Paul Lagasi
09-26-2011, 03:44 PM
Ditto on just a bit brighter, love the remnants of the toilet in the left corner, first thing to go....:S3:

Nice use of filters, and colors solid... Well done
Andrew McLachlan
09-26-2011, 04:35 PM
Hi Jay, very nice comp and filtering too! I think just a tad brighter on the right side only.
Cheryl Slechta
09-26-2011, 04:52 PM
Jay, really nicely done. I agree with Paul that a little lightening on the right might look good. I got a kick out of the toilet:S3: I would also like this as a pano with a crop from the top to right below the roof line.
Jay Sheinfield
09-26-2011, 05:14 PM
Here it is a bit brighter.............especially on the right.

Cheryl, Funny, I have a cropped version, more like a pano which I also like..............
Indranil Sircar
09-26-2011, 06:34 PM
Excellent filtering, Jay. Wonderful composition and repost. Like the colors and the effect of the filters.
denise ippolito
09-26-2011, 07:25 PM
Jay, Nice work with the filter. I think Cheryl's idea for a pano as an alternate is good but I kind of like the interest of the missing roofing. I think somewhere between the two posts a s far as lightness would be good.
Steve Adkins
09-26-2011, 10:44 PM
Jay, I enjoy these images that tell a story. I liked most of the original brightness... especially the tones of the tin roofs.The trees improved the most in the repost. Wonderful touch with simplify!
Jay Sheinfield
09-26-2011, 11:22 PM
Jay, I enjoy these images that tell a story. I liked most of the original brightness... especially the tones of the tin roofs.The trees improved the most in the repost. Wonderful touch with simplify!

Too much light......only the trees this time as suggested. It's late, I may messed up the colors...........:S3:, nope I messed up the crop! Version control problem!
Steve Adkins
09-27-2011, 07:04 AM
:S3: Love the overall tones/brightness on this one, Jay.
Jay Sheinfield
09-27-2011, 04:21 PM
:S3: Love the overall tones/brightness on this one, Jay.

Thanks, Steve...........I lucked into it:S3:
Jay Sheinfield
09-28-2011, 03:25 AM
Thanks everyone. I really appreciate the feedback. I hope I got the lighting more balanced right and left.