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Meint Sijp
01-04-2008, 04:09 PM
I took this photo in Melbourne Australia 2004 after a thunderstorm.
:)

Canon 10D, 1/250, F6.7, 50mm Sigma makro 1:1 2.8 ISO 200 Handheld No flash only the sun.

regards meint

Alfred Forns
01-04-2008, 08:11 PM
I like the basic idea and bold colors Would move the center left and slightly down Would fit better in frame and get rid of the hot spot on the lower left Light was a bit harsh and could have used a diffuser ( I'm a big fan of diffusers)

Meint Sijp
01-05-2008, 08:19 AM
Hi Al i¨ll try and remake it ones ive found the raw shot and see what i can do. thanks for your comments.....

Sven Bernert
01-05-2008, 08:26 AM
Yups, very harsh light in this one. What I do like is how you placed the plane of focus in order to draw viewers attention onto the droplets.

All the best, neighbor! :)
Sven

Robert Amoruso
01-05-2008, 10:50 AM
Al's comment on using diffusers in the field is valid. I carry them with me whenever I think I might be shooting close-ups. Moving left and down would strengthen the image's composition. I like the plane of focus.