View Full Version : Wading Willet
Robert vanMierop
09-05-2011, 09:32 PM
D300, 300 f4 @ f5.6, 1/2500, iso 450
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g101/bobbyv1/0905x.jpg
Gordon McKechnie
09-06-2011, 12:55 AM
Nice image, Robert. I really like the pose with large water droplets in front. Exposure also looks good to me, and nice catchlight. Also great head-angle.
Looks to me like the image should be rotated clock-wise a bit, as the main wake in the water doesn't look straight. I think the post could do with some more sharpening, as the face & eye in particular don't seem quite sharp enough. How much of a crop was this post? Perhaps you could leave a bit more space around the bird, especially in front, as it feels slightly cramped.
Robert vanMierop
09-06-2011, 06:49 AM
Suggestions well taken. I made some changes and I agree, they're a little better.
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g101/bobbyv1/0905z.jpg
Thanaboon Jearkjirm
09-06-2011, 12:03 PM
Great suggestion given by Gordon and the re-post is much improve in my opinion. I might try to crop a bit tighter than the re-post, but not as much as the original. Good exposure, pose, angle of capture and the re-post look sharp :)
Jeff Cashdollar
09-06-2011, 09:50 PM
Robert,
I like the repost, more room was needed IMO. Might take some off the bottom as well, all subject stuff. How large was the crop, some areas look a tad soft, for example head. Anyway, on balance a nice moment in nature. Thanks or sharing and keep em coming.
Kerry Perkins
09-08-2011, 08:34 PM
Hi Robert, nice capture and good job on the repost - looks much better. When you post an image please give us as much tech info as you can, i.e., metering mode, exposure mode, tripod or handheld, etc. Thanks!
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