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Grahame Hamblin
09-04-2011, 10:16 PM
Started to get real close 100mm macro F2 Iso 200 shutter speed way up hand held

John Storjohann
09-05-2011, 12:44 PM
Hi Grahame;

This image has a lot of strong visual elements...I think it might benefit from tightening the crop a bit. If it were mine, I'd crop it to just above the water drop on the center vein of the left hand petal...approximately 1/3 or so of the way up. It leaves you with an almost square crop, but IMHO - and that's all it is! - it strengthens an already good composition. Nice job seeing the possibilities in the tulip!

Daniel Cadieux
09-06-2011, 11:50 AM
As someone who likes soft images and wide apertures I'd actually like to see more DOF to make the petal completely sharp in this case. I do find the tips are close to the edge above, so either making this a little wider for more room above, or cropping closer as per John would be two options to explore. Lovely colours and I like the water drops, nice even lighting too.

Roman Kurywczak
09-07-2011, 10:12 AM
Hey Grahame,
Glad to see Daniel chime in on the DOF......as I gnereally prefer more. Good catch on the room up top and nice suggestions by John too for you to consider in the field next time out.