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Rudi van den Heever
08-17-2011, 01:59 PM
Taken in Pilanesberg Nature Reserve, South Africa...

Equipment: Canon 7D and 500mm F4 L lens
Settings:1/1600s at F5.6 and ISO 200

Hilary Hann
08-17-2011, 07:58 PM
Rudi, I like it very much. Lovely detail and super smooth background make for a nice abstract. There is a small white spot on the black stripe at the 8 o'clock position from the eye which I'd get rid of.

Marc Mol
08-17-2011, 08:14 PM
Love the framing, colour & detail and super BG here Rudi.:cheers:
TFS

Lorant Voros
08-17-2011, 10:05 PM
A really cool image. Love the colors, detail and composition. It all works for me just fine. Well done,

Lorant

Marina Scarr
08-17-2011, 10:17 PM
Love what you've done with this one. It is different and powerful.

Nancy Bell
08-17-2011, 10:39 PM
The sharp, fine details of this slice of zebra and the unusual composition make this an exquisite image. Very creative and well thought out and executed.

Ofer Levy
08-17-2011, 11:00 PM
I love this! Very effective. Maybe just a tiny boost in contrast and colours. WDYT?

Rudi van den Heever
08-18-2011, 02:21 AM
Thanks for the positive feedback everyone!:w3

Steve Kaluski
08-18-2011, 03:22 AM
Hi Rudi, really like the concept behind this and the simplicity of the image.

What you could try is to bring in both sliders in Levels (left & right) so they are just touching the base line, as this I feels adds a bit more pop to the image, however you can move them in more or less, just depends on personal preference. Do this as an adjustment layer as you can then just open the eye up a fraction, retaining that nice chestnut colour, but not to the point where you cann see your vehicle.:bg3:

TFS
Steve

Morkel Erasmus
08-18-2011, 06:04 AM
Lovely perspective here Rudi! Will work well as B&W too :w3
Some good suggestions by Steve...and I like Ofer's repost, though if I were to make one I would bump contrast a tad. :e3

Rachel Hollander
08-18-2011, 07:45 AM
Rudi - well envisioned and carried out. The detail, color and bg are all great.

TFS,
Rachel

Rudi van den Heever
08-18-2011, 09:50 AM
Followed Steve's advice... hope I have not overdone it... An improvement?:e3

Thanks for the help everyone?

Steve Kaluski
08-18-2011, 12:14 PM
Looks good to me Rudi, but you have the ultimate say, WDYT? :S3:

Dumay de Boulle
08-18-2011, 12:16 PM
I like this a lot. Great BG and repost is tops...Very nice idea!

Rudi van den Heever
08-18-2011, 12:53 PM
Thanks Dumay!

Sure a great idea to make it "pop" Steve... New at CS5 and fist had to do some reading on adjustment layers after your post!:e3

Am I the only one that struggles to stay logged on to BPN?????????

Grant Atkinson
08-18-2011, 03:29 PM
Great work here with the composition adn the repost...super shot Rudi
cheers
Grant

Jamie Douglas
08-18-2011, 04:16 PM
I really like this composition Rudi and the repost has the right amount of pop. Simple yet powerful image.

John Blumenkamp
08-18-2011, 10:33 PM
Absolutely love this... creative composition and the details look amazing against that nice background. Amazing image! I think the repost looks great.

Rudi van den Heever
08-19-2011, 02:09 AM
Thanks for the postive feedback eveyone!:S3:

Robert Amoruso
08-19-2011, 03:52 PM
Rudi,

Great out-of-the-box thinking here.

Rudi van den Heever
08-20-2011, 05:05 AM
Thanks Robert!:S3: Difficult to please the BPN community!:e3

DanWalters
08-20-2011, 11:11 PM
Very creative image! Like the clean background. Really brings out the lashes.

Rudi van den Heever
08-22-2011, 03:28 AM
Appreciated Dan!:S3: