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Kaustubh Deshpande
07-05-2011, 09:47 AM
40D. 400 f5.6L at f/6.3. iso 320. 1/2500s. cropped from horizontal. had to add some canvas on top.

All critiques welcome.

Craig Brelsford
07-05-2011, 10:08 AM
Another lesson in low angles from you, Kaus. Your addition of canvas is seamless. Could more color be coaxed out of the pinkish tan neck? Is the image not a bit noisy?

Kaustubh Deshpande
07-05-2011, 10:12 AM
Craig, I dont see much noise...some jpg compression artifacts, yes. What is the size and resolution of your monitor? Noise can be more apparent if monitor is low resolution.

Mike Milicia
07-05-2011, 10:14 AM
Perfect pose for this head-on angle and beautiful setting and BG!

Might be an illusion but I keep thinking it needs some CW rotation.
Would like to see a bit more breathing room at the bottom for the virtual feet of this long-legged guy.

Craig Brelsford
07-05-2011, 10:17 AM
Hi Kaus, I'm at 1280 x 1024.

Kaustubh Deshpande
07-05-2011, 10:25 AM
Hi Kaus, I'm at 1280 x 1024.

what size? that would be good resolution on a small laptop but low on a big monitor. My work monitor is 24 in and has a 1920X1080...not good by current standards. But I am not seeing any noise even on that. My Sony laptop at home is a 16.9in and has a resolution of 1600X900...quite decent actually. I am planning to buy a good high res monitor some time soon.

Grace Scalzo
07-05-2011, 10:28 AM
Love your low angle (Your signature), nice exposure and colors. The first time I looked at this, it felt a bit snug on the right side (as viewed) and on the bottom. Second time, I think just on the bottom.

Kaustubh Deshpande
07-05-2011, 10:35 AM
Thx, Grace and Mike. I think I have more room at the bottom. I did not include it because I did not have enough room at the top to strike a balance. I will go back to the orig file, include more room at bottom and then may be extend the canvas at the top some more.

In-camera vertical would have been ideal but the bird was walking parallel to me and then made a 180deg turn. I clicked when he was making the turn.

Dumay de Boulle
07-05-2011, 10:44 AM
I like it, the pose and exp are perfect. Legs dont seem as sharp as the body, just wondering if you have any at maybe f8-9 as you had plenty SS. Great BG and awesome light, love your work!:S3:

Wynand van Wyk
07-05-2011, 10:46 AM
Agree with Kaustubh. A bit more space at the bottom would add even more to a super image!

I love the angle and the detail on the bird! The background is beautiful as well.

Superbly done!:S3:

RakeshDhareshwar
07-05-2011, 10:55 AM
Brilliant low angle image here !! Nice compo ...love it . The small waves / bubbles around the leg distract a wee bit .

Craig Brelsford
07-05-2011, 10:57 AM
what size? that would be good resolution on a small laptop but low on a big monitor. My work monitor is 24 in and has a 1920X1080...not good by current standards. But I am not seeing any noise even on that. My Sony laptop at home is a 16.9in and has a resolution of 1600X900...quite decent actually. I am planning to buy a good high res monitor some time soon.

Oh, right, of course. I've got a 17-inch monitor.

Kaustubh Deshpande
07-05-2011, 11:06 AM
Craig, I'd say for 17 inch monitor, 1280 X 1024 is not very low(must be 95-something PPI). Then, I am a bit surprised that you see noise.

Vivaldo Damilano
07-05-2011, 01:08 PM
Fantastic Kaustubh, another great low angle image from you. Great head turn and excellent BG :cheers:

Nico Steenberg
07-05-2011, 03:37 PM
Super low angle and eye contact. The exposure is nailed and the soft colours is great !

Charles Scheffold
07-05-2011, 08:36 PM
I really like this one - beautiful bird, background, lighting, and low angle. Very nice on all points. Wouldn't change a thing.

thanks
Charles

arash_hazeghi
07-05-2011, 09:59 PM
great Kaustubh, love the low angle and pose, would crank up the contrast and sharpen more

christopher galeski
07-06-2011, 05:22 AM
very nice KD,love the colors,nice pose,a vote for a bit more room on the bottom.thanks.

Jim Crosswell
07-06-2011, 07:47 AM
Nice image Kaustubh. I like the low angle, HA and BG.

Kiran Poonacha
07-06-2011, 09:19 AM
Beautiful image KD, loved the angle and IQ here.. Nice colors too..