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Stephen Davis
03-27-2008, 08:04 PM
1D3
300 2.8 2X II
1/1250 6.3
HH BB
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Thanks for looking
Steve

Rene Quenneville
03-27-2008, 08:08 PM
Hello Stephen,

This is a beautiful bird and the pose is perfect. You could add some canvas to the top in order to give more room over the head. You seem to have over sharpened the bird.

Robert Amoruso
03-27-2008, 08:22 PM
Stephen,

I like the blue color reflection. I would suggest that you crop off the reflection of the swan since it is not strong. Removing it will draw the viewer right to the bird. Then the top would look OK. My version below. Don't forget about virtual feet.

Gus Cobos
03-27-2008, 08:28 PM
Very nice composition, love the color of the water, must agree with the rest about giving your swan more room on top. Also the background could be just a tid bit lighter for my taste...:D

Jody Melanson
03-27-2008, 08:36 PM
I agree with Robert here as the reflection is not adding anything to this. Nice use of flash.

Alfred Forns
03-28-2008, 08:09 AM
Firts thing I thought was getting rid of the reflection I like the re post !!!

Judy Lynn Malloch
03-28-2008, 12:09 PM
Pretty capture and excellent exposure. I agree about the cropping and like very much Robert's repost. Thanks for sharing Stephen.