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bhavya joshi
06-09-2011, 06:19 AM
As per Title, this Little jumper. Telling No to me don't... Take my photo.:bg3:
Well it was found me in my backyard. And I found that it was doing unique activities with their pedipalp (Body part,Comes near to poison glad)And from This Pedipalp Hiding his eye.
for some times I don't now Why..
but I captured nice moment of this jumper.
Hope you enjoy it.

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/246783_224157367614327_100000601962672_875379_1736 063_n.jpg

Mitch Haimov
06-09-2011, 08:00 PM
Great job, Joshi! You captured an interesting behavioral moment. Sharp where it needs to be and I like the soft BG and FG. I do recommend cropping just enough from the left to remove the bright area, which will both eliminate a distracting element and improve the composition. Eyes are already on a rule of thirds line and the suggested crop would bring them further from the left-right center and closer to a ROT point. Your work has really improved--congratulations! :5:5

Jerry van Dijk
06-10-2011, 02:44 PM
Hi Joshi, very funny pose of this little fellow! He doesn't seem to like the flash!
Nice details, exposure and BG. Well done!

Steve Maxson
06-10-2011, 04:20 PM
Hi Joshi. You captured a cool pose that fits your title very well! I wonder if these guys use their pedipalps to clean their eyes - like a windshield wiper?? The sharpness is right where it needs to be and I like the off-center comp. I agree that the white area on the left should be removed - either by cropping or cloning over it. You might also consider toning down the bright area to the right of the spider. These tweaks will take this interesting image up a notch or two. :S3: Overall, this is well done.

bhavya joshi
06-14-2011, 12:52 AM
Thanks Steve for information.. :S3: