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Giovanni Frescura
06-01-2011, 08:05 AM
Canon Mark IV
Canon 300 f.2,8
F.4,5
iso 1000
1/2500

I so it no too much sharp...what you think abou could be better and how ?
Thanks

Geoff Warnock
06-01-2011, 09:42 AM
exposure looks good, and great pose. I think extra sharpening on the bird could achieve a lot, and rotate a bit anticlockwise to straighten the horizon in the background. You might need to extend the canvas a little then though to avoid clipping the wings.

Giovanni Frescura
06-01-2011, 10:03 AM
Thanks
off course for the horizont; I no made it because I wait notice about the shoot befoure go on . For me the problem is also the dimensionality. What I can do for it ...only sharpening more ?
Thanks

Geoff Warnock
06-01-2011, 10:07 AM
otherwise I like it. sharpening, rotation and perhaps some contrast boost would be the major steps for me. Have you worked on the feathers on the upper wing? some look strangely round.

Bill Dix
06-01-2011, 02:08 PM
Looks good to me, Giovanni. I especially like the wing tip in the water. I agree with Geoff -- just some rotation, a bit of sharpening, and a little contrast boost or levels adjustment to make the whites whiter.

Kaustubh Deshpande
06-01-2011, 03:45 PM
what a pose. Very nice angle as well. As Bill said, that wing tip topuching the water is indeed a plus. Good critiques above that will help improve the image a lot.